Body Paragraph One – Point 1 a. What documents will you use in this section? Give a quick reason why for each one. (5 points) A: City upon a hill speech, model city, unity D: Not a speech but listed idea similar to City upon a hill, fairness E: People should earn fair wages for the work they do, religion does not influence pay; again, fairness b. List outside information (facts) that will back up your point and documents.
I referred to unit 7’s discussion post where you outlined your essay. So far your research has proven to make for an interesting essay. I’m sorry I did not find a persuasive thesis statement in Unit 8 though, meaning I’m not convinced that there should be a policy change. I know you stated this is a working thesis statement which was not included in unit 8’s post. If you don’t mind, I would like to give some guidance.
Body Paragraph #1: Reason #1 and Evidence Supporting Sentences: Using the structure: “Evidence, Elaborate, Explain, Examples” Cite from any 2 documents and explain why this evidence shows that the results
Throughout history, Africa has not only been whitewashed and demonized, but also has been belittled, diminished, and dismissed entirely because of human ignorance. Monsters and human beasts were rumored to roam Africa due to false information and misunderstandings of early {European} explorers. Oxford historian Hugh Trevor-Roper even went as far as to say that Africa has nothing to offer but darkness before European conquest and exploitation, making Africa not respected enough to study. This statement is racist, unenlightened, and undeviatingly inaccurate and steamed solely off of personal bias and takes away all credibility of Trevor-Roper, rightfully so. English historian and author John Reader combated this idea with his African bibliography,
Body: Give your reasoning to be able to argue your point(maybe multiple paragraphs. Give evidence to back up these points to make your argument stronger. Give a counter argument to show the other side to your argument. Conclusion: Summarize your writing.
As our final assignment for cornerstone we were tasked with revising our rhetorical analysis. I received a B, 81%, and by the end of my revisions have “A” quality work. During recent assignments and papers for other classes I realized the thesis was one of the first few sentences in the paper. As I was reading my paper I noticed that the purpose of the author writing this wasn 't until almost halfway into the first paragraph.
II The book describes African Americans in the time period of slavery through civil war and civil rights revolution, to 1980s, after the segregation of the black race. The book mainly focus on the speech done by social activists of different time period. In addition of the reasons and different beliefs of those social activist had. Such as Frederick Douglass, who believe we can’t wait for somebody else to fight freedom for us.
Argument Essay Outline Thesis Statement: Owen J Roberts middle school should increase the time spent in F.C.S because it teaches student parenting skills, it teaches student how to handle money, and it teaches students to be independent. T.S.--Owen J. Roberts should increase the amount of time in F.C.S because it teaches parenting skills. Evidence 1- Knowing F.C.S a student would know what to do if giving the burden of babysitting or accidental pregnancy. For example a teen mom might not know to burp a baby because it's less obvious of a thing that a baby needs to do.
ESSAY OUTLINE The topic 1 chose: 6 1. Introductory Paragraph Introductory Sentence: A Complicated Kindness is one of Myriam Toews’ humoristic creation yet, it depicts the harsh reality of 17 years old Nomi Nickels, struggling to find her identity in the Canadian Mennonite community she lives in.
Thesis Statement (Main Argument/Preview of Points): Outlines your argument/theme. Law should usually be followed, but there are certain circumstances such as if you love someone, a law crosses your morals and if the law is unfair or unequal. BODY PARAGRAPH #1: This first paragraph should focus on how conflicts support theme. I. Topic Sentence: States the literary element and introduces how it supports your theme.
MALLORY SCOTT, 921 Washington St., Reading, Pa. 19601, Phone (610) 320-9943. SCOTT was interviewed via telephone at his home. M. SCOTT is the brother of retired MDJ Wallace Scott from Berks County. M. SCOTT was told about the investigation by the Judicial Conduct Board involving his brother and RICHARDO PENA. M. SCOTT explained that he was once a pretty good friend of PENA.
Explanation(remember that explanations connecting to the claim/subclaim can also go throughout the paragraph) Connection/Inference (Explain connection to claim/subclaim and/or how it proves your point) Concluding Sentence (Wrap up
A thesis statement is the main argument of your essay. Your thesis statement should be an argument you feel you can substantiate with evidence from the literature you've read. If you can't do this, choose a different thesis statement. Note that an essay is not a book report. Therefore, your thesis statement should not be something inarguable, like: "Romeo and Juliet is a play about the struggles of two lovers fated to be apart.
President Theodore Roosevelt once said “The government is us; we are the government, you and I.” ("Theodore Roosevelt Quote." BrainyQuote. Xplore. Web. 11 Sept. 2015.)
I have completed my Introduction with trying to put a hook,background information, important material, and thesis statement. I have found sources for information to add. Work I Have Yet To Complete