Identifiable Thesis Statement

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I have submitted a rough draft essay for a course I’m taking. I received my essay back and it stated that there were some issues that needed to be addressed. After reviewing my paper, I realized the message I conveyed previously wasn’t identifiable by the targeted audience. When doing my revision these are the things I’ll be looking for and steps I’ll be taking. o Identifiable thesis statement. The thesis makes sense and has continuity. o I’ll read the essay aloud checking for any grammar or punctuation errors. Spell check will help with this process. o Identify my audience. Know exactly who it is I’m targeting. Check for tone and formality of the language making sure its suitable for the targeted audience. o Be concise and eliminate