Hook (question, interesting fact, or story): Evidence #2: In the article “pros and cons of year-round-school?” on paragraph 9 it states that “Student summer employment becomes virtually impossible” This shows if the student can work, they will not be able to help their family out or complete their working hours necessary for them to graduate high school.
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Reason #1: First, Kids should not go to year-around schoolings Because it didn’t have a difference on the kids academically.
Evidence #1: First, on the article “Pros and cons of year-round schools” by Melissa Kelly on paragraph 9 it says, “studies have not conclusively proven the academic benefits.” This shows that the year around schoolings had no effect for students academically
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body 3: Did you know that year-around schooling has no difference on kids like traditional