1. One Strength In My Writing : One strength in my writing piece is how I did not use conversational tone. In my writing I did not put SO, contractions, I, me, and etc. I did well in editing conversational tone in my writing.

2. Two Weaknesses In My Writing :

A weakness in my writing piece is that I put too much information. In paragraph one I put two sentences that were unnecessary because they did not have anything to do with the setting. I need to make my statements specific to question and not adding what is unnecessary.

Another weakness in my writing piece is that I need to edit more. There is at least one grammar mistake in each paragraph of my writing, two pairs of brackets and I have two word choice suggestions.