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Pay Between Men And Women Rhetorical Analysis

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Hello Eleanor, I agree too that there is an inequality in pay between men and women. This is an important issue to our country, and must be addressed as such. Though this country always overcomes inequality and will succeed in the future. The introduction gave a strong emotional stance on the issue. It established many reasons to your thesis and laid out the main points. Your grammar was formed nicely, and your punctuation had little to no errors in my opinion. The transitions you used helped the paper flow well, and were used right. The conclusion also went along with the thesis, giving a good ending. However I have some feedback you might be able to use in your final draft According to the rubric, your essay should have been five to seven
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