Analyzing Willy Loman's Murder

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The crimes will start about 10 miles down from an abandoned barn, in which our murderer would brutally mutilate the body of every one of his victims. He bought that large abandoned barn in the middle of nowhere. The closest neighbor was a few miles away. He will murder his family members because they used to always bother his fingers and toes. He is very odd. Before he begins, he will completely shave off his hair and all of his body hair. He would then pile it up and burn it in a metal trash can. Then he will bury it. He will do this continuously so that no hair will be found. His first murder would be his brother. He sent his brother a letter because when anybody finds out that his brother is missing, they may call who he was last in contact …show more content…

Seeing as though his brother doesn’t have a wife and kids, he would come by himself. When the brother gets near, he would run over the spikes that our murderer would have laid out on the road, 10 miles away from his barn. They would be very small and sprayed a matte black because if it were left silver, it would be very reflective. Attached to the spikes, would be very tiny sensors that would send our murderer a signal showing that his victims ran over the spikes. When the victim runs over them, he would lose control and go into a large ditch so his car cannot get out. Then our murderer will go quickly to his personal car and drive quickly to where he had crashed. He would then offer him a ride to his barn. Once they reach the barn, he would start out showing him a very quaint foyer. In that foyer, it would be very well soundproofed. After talking for a bit, he would wait for his brother to turn around so he can shoot him in the back of the head. He, of course, would have gloves on considering it's his first murder. Seeing as though the room is very soundproofed, the only sound that would escape would be a slight bang sound like if he were to be hammering …show more content…

After that, he will break the bones in his brother’s face so that the face would be unrecognizable. He would then store the body in a freezer that is sealed very well so that no smells will seep out. Then he goes out to get the car that his brother took. After retrieving the car, he will send three more letters. One would be to his father, the other to his mother, and the third one would be to his sister. When they all arrive, he would ask them to come in, one by one, and pretend that he wants them to have an individual experience when they first see it. They would, of course, go in with their eyes covered so it can be a “surprise”. When they enter, he will shoot them in the head, one by one, dragging their bodies aside before the next one enters. Now that he has successfully killed the three of them, he will take his brother’s corpse from out of the freezer, and let it thaw out whilst he cuts off the fingers and toes of his three other family members. When he is finished, his brother’s corpse would have thawed out because it is warm in the main area of the barn. Now that he has all of those fingers and toes, he will sew them back onto the feet and hands randomly with each finger and toe, from a different