When I received my assignment back from my TA, I realized that I had some improvements that needed to be made to my paper to ensure a higher mark. By looking at the comments made by my TA, referring to the Writing History book for guidance and using my own knowledge, I was able to correct my mistakes. The first step I took in my revision process was to read all the comments and changes that he made. This helped me understand the quality of my paper and how much I needed to edit. The first point that my TA mentioned that needed some improvement was the structure of my thesis statement. My thesis needed to be elaborated to include the main points of my argument relating to the primary source. To improve my thesis, I made sure to incorporate my