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My Revision Process: Pathos, Ethos And Logos

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My revision process is better then expected. The advice you have given me for the material has helped me tremendously. I hope that the revisions I have turned in will show the changes that helped me progress on the writing material. I look at papers completely different now for reviewing any type of paper given. I always look for the Pathos, Ethos and Logos in papers or actually anything I read for that matter. My class participation I think is more than fair. Every class I try and communicate with my classmates and you. I always put my opinion on the videos or content you share with us in class. I’ve only missed two classes this semester, and I think I have made them up by asking questions and talking amongst my classmates on what I’ve …show more content…

For example:” No Justice” was by far my favorite and most difficult to write about. I like to share my past regardless good or bad. The struggles I still have on writing is keeping a smooth transition from one part of the subject to the next. I’m also not the best with using punctuation the way it is needed. This class has taught me many things, but my favorite has to be the way we look at papers from here on out. Pathos and Ethos is permanently with me during anything I read; I had no idea what Pathos or Ethos was before I took this class. You have taught that aspect of this class so well. My favorite paper I have done Is my Personal Narrative. It was a story that I tried to leave behind but I couldn’t. It was hard to revisit that part of my life to write about, but needed to write it down at some point and you gave me that chance. Even thought that is probably my worst graded paper I take pride in being able to talk about it. This class has taught me how to be more involved with a professor and other classmates. That is my something that will help me further my career, communication is key. This class has also taught me the simple things that can be missed in a paper. Organization is key with writing a paper as well. I will always keep your advice and teachings with my throughout my writing career in

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