First, I did well in my introduction. I was able to come up with something interesting that listed all the points that I wanted to cover. Also, I was pleased to know that the order it was written was coherent enough. Second, my thesis statement, according to the rubric, was "bold and easily identified." I was able to indicate what the paper is going to be about clearly. Third, my topic sentences supported my thesis statement and unified the paragraphs. Fourth, the contents of the essay as well as my transitional expressions were good enough to make the essay understandable and orderly. My conclusion is good enough too. As for the essay structure, I was able to use at least four of the MLA formatting guidelines, and the title of my paper was